I
imagine the potential for a course in which students are able to pit “the lily
flower against the law” (Buell 464). To accomplish my goal, I plan to “remix”
some of the civic engagement projects listed at sciStarter.com. For example, scistarter.com
describes the project “iSeeChange: The Almanac” as follows:
Founded
in April 2012 in Western Colorado, iSeeChange is a public radio and media
experiment that fosters multimedia conversations between citizens and
scientists about how seasonal weather and climate extremes affect daily
American life. From the earliest spring recorded in the history of the United
States, a landmark wildfire season, nationwide droughts, and weather records
breaking everyday, climate affects every citizen and binds communities together.
(Par 2)
The project is mediated
through a website that hosts an almanac in the form of a blog. Similar to a
codex almanac, iSeeChange.com is organized according to seasons and then
subdivided into months, weeks, and days. Each day, community members (citizen scientists) post
pictures and/or short written commentary of local animals, plants,
precipitation, fire damage, and bugs. The site is designed to collect data on
climate change and ways that change effects human, animal, and plant life.
Further, if members have questions, the site organizers will find a scientist
to answer them. But more than just providing expert responses to non-expert
questions, the site seems designed to facilitate a conversation about climate,
place, and the local among its members. In this regard the iSeeChange.com
project and the civically engaged composition classroom expect similar outcomes:
both engage communities in real world writing that is facilitated via digital technology.
I
imagine the almanac as the data collection portion of a larger, stepped student
hypertext project centered on animal studies and ecology. After articulating
and defining the perimeters of their “locales” in a short written argument, students
will post pictures, videos, and/or written descriptions of local places and things,
according to the seasons and the calendar. After rhetorical analysis of
almanacs, some from the MARBL archives, students will write about and document
nature in their own digital almanacs from a first person point of view. Like
the iSeeChange.com project, a digital almanac project in a first year
composition course can go beyond writing about the self and writing about
nature in isolation to a “site from which to develop a progressive pedagogical
and political practice” (Parks xv).
A
digital almanac project in which students create their own texts in the first
person corresponds to Park’s definition of “hybrid voice.” On the one hand, the
student as individual and non-expert is asked to observe and report effects of
local nature on his or her own experiences. On the other hand, the potential
for writing from the first person to become detached from its context is
ameliorated because the individual is placed within her local ecology. Parks
could be describing a hypertext almanac project when he says,
Rather,
the hybridity of voice stands for the dual desire both to create a sense of individual
identity within traditions existing within a classroom space (expressivist or
constructivist or both) and to place that voice within traditions of collective
action—sites where individual identity is subsumed under a community’s
collective needs. ‘Voice,’ therefore, can come to stand as a hybrid
relationship between individual need and collective action. (18)
For example, this portion
of the larger project may develop an understanding of how to weigh the need for
environmental change against the needs of a neighborhood. Further, Parks’
experience with Urban Rhythms lays out ways to anticipate and possibly
avoid the pitfalls of first person narrative pitched toward social justice.
Just as bootstrap, American dream style conservatism inserted itself into the
narratives of students and community members who participated in his project,
nature writing is filled with ideological traps such as nostalgia. Even though writing
about nature may value the pastoral over the urban in uncritical ways, a
hypertext project may be uniquely suited to avoiding constraints of nostalgia
when writing about nature to petition for radical progress toward
sustainability.
Nathaniel
A. Rivers and Ryan P. Weber point toward several ways a project such as the one
I gesture to above can avoid ideological constraints built into inherited
nature writing genres. In their article “Ecological, Pedagogical, PublicRhetoric,” Rivers and Weber argue
…we
readily recognize the impact of rhetoric’s greatest hits while neglecting the
mundane texts that shape institutions and therefore mold human behavior. By
highlighting this mundane, ecological approach, we wish to emphasize that most
changes proposed by advocates occur through concrete modifications to the
institutional structures of government offices, courts, schools, corporations,
and religious and community organizations. (188)
Rivers and Webster
compare the turn toward the mundane in their FYC’s to work by environmental
artist Christo Javacheff, who “considers the permits he files and the public hearings
he attends to be as vital to his art as the final product” (188). As part of
their digital service learning final projects, Rivers and Weber require
students to write such in such mundane genres as formal applications and letter
to the editor. I take River and Webster’s emphasis on the mundane seriously and
plan to require similar textual production from my students. For example if
noise pollution is damaging urban birds, can students file a petition with the
city to eliminate it? If a student wanted to stage a protest against the noise pollution,
what permits would he have to obtain in advance?
I
have some ways to go before the projects examined above could be used in a
classroom. That said, situating the two types of writing in relation to each other
via a hypertext might reduce ideological problems inherent to both genres. A
personal almanac or seasonal blog about local environment can easily fall into
a longing for a past that never exited and valorization of the pastoral over
the urban. That sort of nostalgia undermines environmental progress, in part,
because it is not practical. When permits or letters to the editor can be
linked to personal, local experience they take on greater pathos and more
urgency. Through writing in different genres, students emerge with an ability
to make choices that depend on rhetorical situation and audience needs.
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